"Hmm... I would've changed that."

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Start of the conversation
"Hmm... I would've changed that."
"How disturbing..."
"The iambs are completely off here."
"I'm so bored of imagism."
"I've definitely read this before somewhere."
"Oh dear. Terrible metaphor."
"We need a big opener... bigger!"
"Wish we had more poets from Lower Viudas."
"Should that one go... no, no, not there."
"Lost my pen again..."
"... the rhythm of the universe."
"Concrete or confessional? Hmm."
"We're running out of time..."